Contemplation




He threw rocks in the pond,
contemplating  the waves
 the things he carried in his heart
and as the pond silenced,
he could feel the disturbance propagating
deep inside.

Karla Bardanza







Copyright©Karla Bardanza 2013 Photobucket

11 comments:

  1. This comment has been removed by the author.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Beautiful ... image and words.

    ReplyDelete
  3. More often than not unsavory things are discovered with a little effort. Many may not try and suffer! Nicely Karla!

    Hank

    ReplyDelete
  4. The heart is a garden of ripples - loved this

    ReplyDelete
  5. Beautiful, love "the things he carried in his heart".

    ReplyDelete
  6. lovely poem- very thoughtful and perceptive. Thanks for your nice cmments and have a great day!

    ReplyDelete
  7. I like this quiet poem. I can picture the scene as I read. Can almost read the ripples of the heart. thanks for posting.

    ReplyDelete
  8. Wonderful how you shifted from external to internal--very smooth and well written :-)

    ReplyDelete
  9. Aaaaawwww how I love your words :) wonderful blog and I will go and take a look around http://artistsinblogland.blogspot.de/search/label/challenge

    ReplyDelete
  10. Magic Karla! You have the gold with both the picture and the words. Rivetting! Thanks for this. HeArtfully Yours, Samara

    ReplyDelete
  11. Beautiful poem, Karla!...Christine

    ReplyDelete